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Warm water
Dusty film
Bloodshot eyes
Onions.
The soaps play drama behind me;
Yes, she is your mother.
Phone ringing – running late
Again.
Acrid, stale burning
Sticky spaghetti
Clots of meat
Tasty?
Creaking stairs
Slam the door
I’m fine.
Curl up on the sofa
Hot water bottle – stereotype
Apple, cut in quarters
Penance for my fast food fix?
Mindless surfing;
Flick. Flick. Flick.
The channels expire –
White noise.
©2008-2010 ~BloodDemon13
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Author's Comments

Mindless drivel about some of the things I noticed today. It's that time of the month and it makes me a bit listless and limbo-like, if you get me.

It's not great poetry, I was just going for the disjointed, distorted feeling.

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:iconpoetintheshower:
Fantastic! I love this! The disjointed stantic movement of it is really powerful. Excellent work.
:iconblooddemon13:
Wow thank you for the fave :) merci beaucoup ! x

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Crawling on the planet's face,
Some insects called the Human Race .
Lost in Time
And lost in Space.

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